Wednesday, November 12, 2014

The incredible wonderland

The incredible wonderland

Goal:Create a detailed plan to organise my ideas and information.

One day there was a boy called Billy. He hated sport but he liked adventures and science. I think he is a nerd to subjects. Science, Maths, reading, writing and adventuring. Billy was a nice kid plus he was only 7. Billy's friend Brennan invented a time machine to go to wonderland. Billy thought it was cool and it was cool. Billy jumped in but Brennan shouted Don't go in but it was to late. Billy already jumped in. Billy met a monkey a flying monkey with a bubble. He went on Billy's arm he jumped off and somehow the Monkeys bubble didn't appear. Then they sore the wizard the evil wizard. The monkey said to Billy RUN RUN RUN!!!!! They ran when Billy tripped and twisted his ankle. Billy got back a like a man. He was running again. Billy found the portal. The monkey said JUMP JUMP JUMP!!!
Billy jumped but the monkey didn't so the monkey got squashed to bits. Billy was so sad he wanted to die with the monkey. The next day Billy went in and got squashed to bits like the monkey but they found each other and both of them had a great to see you again awkwardly.

The end

By Houston 


Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Class story chapter 2

Class story Chapter 2

Goal:Create a detailed plan to organise my ideas and information

Ahhhhhh a holiday is great. Oh no kids what are you doing here. No there's no school today. It's the holidays. Yes I know it's hot. Go home now. Thank you. Enjoy the sun. Hold the phone. It's summer I should be surfing. Great now I have my surf board. Joranamooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. This is awesome. Tane what are you doing here. No you shouldn't be in a challenge for underground sharks. You are going to drown. Get up please or you are dead. Thank you. Don't know what it will feel like with a dead child. Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Masave wave. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Help. Woo Hoo. This is so... Kyan. What are you doing. No stingrays will sting you. You could die. No it is not safe. I just said you could die. Stop looking for stingrays. What is wrong with children. How long am I from the beach. Ok phone power. Activate. 100 miles away. Wait. Is that are shark. Phone is that are shark. Oh no. Phone. I dropped my phone in the sea helpppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp. Shark x3. Ahhhhhhhhbhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Surf back x3. Hey phone. Oh wow. How did you teleport me back to home. Let me guess. You are a magic phone and you teleported me back. You can speak. A speaking phone awesome. Dang it. Really, I have to buy are new phone I love my phone. Where is my surfboard phone. Thanks phone. Wait my phone still works. yay. Mum guess what I saw mum mum mum noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mum why mum your alive.